I cried.
I cried even more because I knew my tears won’t resurrect a life
and then I finished and fought my own thoughts.
Two things. Either I moved on or I refused to deal with
loved ones who had set their sails far from memory’s bay,
as their eyes closed,
never to open again.
what a sad truth indeed.. this is a nice share. keep penning.
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..never to open again.
–there, you got me. 😦
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This one I dedicate to the people who lost family and friends from the Paris bombings. It was all over the news. My condolence shall reach out to them, may hearts heal with time.
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We pray for that, like you said about scars.
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Good work:)
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Thanks!
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This is a great post! I am fond of your poetic style of writing. You express a diverse set of emotions within a few lines which is striking and powerful at the same time. In terms of language and writing skills, my best advice is to continue reading novels and continue practicing. Here to help if you need any more assistance/advice.
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Thank you!
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This is beautiful! Honestly, I don’t know what else to say– it’s just so lovely! The depth, the simplicity, the conciseness… it’s a great piece.
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Wow. Thank you so much!
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Beautiful and honest.
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God, this is devastating. It evokes so many emotions. Keep writing! 🙂
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This is really good! We all hope to be better at what we do, but keep in mind that you’re doing absolutely well. Mehn, this is sheer beaut!
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Wow. I did not expect these kind of comments. Thank You! it’s flattering.
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Wow. I wouldn’t mind owning an anthology of your works. Touching, powerful words. Thank you. You’ve got one more follower!
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Thank you… for reading my works and for supporting me in my endeavors in writing!
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Again a beautiful combination of feelings with words
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Wow. Thank you! I hope to be better at writing 🙂
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You are already better. Its turn to become best. Best of luck
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Keep writing! Your words are captivating. Grace and love to you. God bless
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Thank you!
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I think you sum up exactly what so many feel.
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Thanks 🙂
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