I heard your silence
like bittersweet melodies in my head
a soundless humming in my heart
and I could almost
feel your hands on mine
like where it was before
My hands shiver from their void
longing for the slightest bit of caress from your skin
wafting through its loneliness
catching only dry air in between the spaces of my fingers
Time has stolen our promises
regrets echo in the whispers of the chilly wind
hissing by my side
as I bury uncertainties in misery
as I carry on in the loudest silence I have ever heard
with the saddest music you gave me
Reblogged this on Everydayclimb's Blog.
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I was pleasantly surprised when I began reading your words. They flow. They fly. I’m a new subscriber now!
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Oh wow… thanks!
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omgg, u really wrote that?? that is amaaaazing! U’re really really good!
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Oh, Thanks!
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Wow, you are an amazing writer! 🙂 I really enjoyed this piece, please keep writing and thank you so much for sharing this with me 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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You are most welcome 😊
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Beautifully written. Poetry is such a deep way of crafting your feelings with. Thanks for sharing. 🙂
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Thank you for leaving a kind comment. Thank you for taking the time to read it also!
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Reblogged this on LIVE WITH LEGACY and commented:
It’s where we really exist! #Silence#WordsAreFullofLetters
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Thank you! Thank you..
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beautifully written.
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Thanks!
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great piece. this piece is really emotional… I love it.
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Thanks!
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I love your poems…you are really good! English has gotten nothing on you! You communicate very well, I could almost feel that touch too! LOL
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Thank You! I’m glad you almost felt it 🙂
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I love and have enjoyed your words, very poignant and beautiful. I am looking forward to read much more of your work.
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Thank You! I will continue to write.
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This is all too true! Sometimes silence is the loudest thing in the world.
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Indeed
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I love your work…you write very beautifully….
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Thanks!
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Dear, Do forgive to those who gave you the saddest music for all of us, just humans. erroneous and astray we born.. Poetry is a beautiful expression of solitude. always drink it.. cheers..!!!
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Thanks! I will be guided 🙂
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I love your style, thanks for following me 🙂
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Your welcome! 🙂
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Full of emotional stir!
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Thank you for leaving a kind comment! It’s words like these that inspire me to continue what I enjoy doing.
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🙂 you are welcome!!
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perfection. absolute perfection. it definitely sings to this musician’s soul.
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on Dream Big, Dream Often.
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Thank you for your reblog! It’s nice to have people read my poetic attempts. With the passage of time, I shall gain experience. Bad reviews are welcomed, they won’t be so bad after I use them to learn and improve. While the good comments inspire me to continue what I enjoy doing.
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My pleasure!
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beautifully crafted the feelings into words!
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Thank You!
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Wow! Just Wow!
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Hey, thank you so much! with these three words you have inspired me to continue writing 🙂
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Beautiful piece! reads well like a classic. It touched my heart, I’ve had such sadness. Please go on writing! 🙂
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Thanks! I will
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This is an amazing piece on heartache. I thought I was poetic in how I wrote these out, you made mine look like the words of a two year old in comparison. I love it.
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Thanks! It is very kind of you to say those words 🙂
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Really beautifully threaded in words
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Thanks 🙂 I hope to be better in writing!
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“as I carry on in the loudest silence I’ve ever heard” – lovely
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Thanks for stopping by and leaving a kind comment!
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